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Post by Lise Marie :) on Apr 1, 2007 22:31:35 GMT 1
Denne ficen e ikke ferdig skrevet endå.. og eg er ikke sikker på titlen. men eg legger ut begynellsen så får dåke sei ka dåke mener please hehe Kan si litt om handlingen så lang... Din bestevenn har fått en stor sjanse i et band så heter McFLY. Di har verden forann seg og di fleste trur di kommer te å nå langt. Dagen han reiser kysser han deg!! Du sitter igjen helt forvirra og aner ingenting!! Noe sånt hehe “Everything was different now. Don’t you se? He shouldn’t have kissed me” I looked at my best friend, Lauren. She always knew what to do. “Take it easy, Kathrin. I don’t think he would kiss you if he didn’t mean something about it.” Lauren looked at before she had to go. She was going on at date whit some idiot. I lied back in the grass and started thinking of the day before. It was the day Danny was leaving for London. We spent the day together. It was so nice. I couldn’t believe that my best friend was moving so far away. I known him since I was 12 years old and we had always been friends since. Anyway, right before he was going on the plain he kissed me, not like a friend kiss, but something more. It was so amazing, I loved it. But now I have no idea of were we are, like are we just still friends or? “Kathrin, phone!!” my mum yelled. I picked up the phone. “Hello” I sad carefully. “Hey you” I knew that voice. It was Danny’s. “How is it going” I sad whit a happy voice. “Great, but I miss Bolton already. Everything is so big here” he sad with a laugh. “That’s true. So how the other lads?” I hadn’t met them before but they seamed very nice. “They are good. We are actually going out to eat now so I have to go” he sad whit a little sadness in his voice. “Okey then, talk to you later Jones” I sad, a little disappointed. “Ye I call, I promises, love you girl!” he sad and hang up.. I stared at the phone for a second. That went well I though to myself.
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Post by A n ii t a on Apr 1, 2007 22:48:52 GMT 1
ååå! braa<3 flink;D
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Post by Aliice on Apr 2, 2007 12:49:23 GMT 1
aaw, god start ^^
meeeir (:
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Post by Lise Marie :) on Apr 2, 2007 19:31:04 GMT 1
skal skrive litt mer no men sliter med skrive sperre XD haha men kan prøve!!
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Post by Lise Marie :) on Apr 2, 2007 21:10:59 GMT 1
her er mer Weeks went by and I and Danny talked on the phone some times. But it wasn’t the same as old times. I guess it wasn’t supposed to but I mist him so much! “You’ll get over him soon. You know Patrick fancies you. Maybe you should go out whit him. Maybe you will forget Danny then.” Lauren looked at me with a happy smile, as we sat in my room listen to music. “No not Patrick!!! The point is that I don’t wane forget him. He is my best friend. Beside you then” I sad whit a little sadness in my voice. “Awww that’s so cute” Lauren sad with a big grin on her face. Then my phone starts ringing like hell. I just looked at it. I picked it up. “Hello” I sad whit a nice voice. “Long time, no talk” the voice in the phone answered. I knew that voice. “If you have forgot my voice, I’m Danny. You know?” he sad whit a laugh. “Of course I remember you, I could never forget you Jones” I heard myself say whit a laugh. “So how is it going?” he sad whit a cute voice. I tried to not started leafing when I saw Lauren hysterically tried to get me to say something. Then she decided to write it down. On the paper it stood: say that you miss him!! I laugh when I saw it. Then I answered Danny. “Well, I miss you, you know” I sad nervously. I could hear voices in the background and that Danny talked to someone. “I miss you to you know. I just talked to the other guys. I was suppose to ask you this sooner but how would you like to come visit me in London?” he sad whit the cutest voice! “I - I love to. If its okey whit my parents” I sad in a shaky voice. “Great, call me when you have talked to them then” he sad happily. “Yeah sure. Talk to you then” A week later I find my self in the airport waiting to get on the plain. Danny had sent me a ticket and promised to pick me up at the airport. In the airport there were some old friends of mine. They heard I was meeting the famous McFLY and was asking me to get there autographs and stuff. I just sad no, a lot of them did knew Danny as well, they just didn’t had the guts to contact him. “Hey girl, how you doing? You mum sad is time to get on the plain” Lauren came up and smiled at me. “yes I better get going. Love you girl!” I sad looking at her whit a smile. “Love you to. Call me every day!” We hugged and I went to say good bye to the rest of the people. The plain took about an hour and when I got to London a lady that worked at the airport look at me whit a strange look. “Excuse me, are you Kathrin Parker?” she sad went I was heading to the luggage delivered thing. “Yes I am” I sad wondering what she wanted. “If you can come whit me? McFLY is waiting for you in the back. They don’t want everybody to see them, you see.” I just followed the lady, still in shock. After a while I saw four faces I just had seen in magazines the past weeks. But one of them, the one whit the biggest smile on his face, he I knew! He looked like the same old boy! He starts running against me, picks me up and give me a big hug, like he haven’t seen me in years. I just laugh and looked in to the beautiful blue eyes of him. “Its so good to see you. This is my bands mates Dougie, Tom and Harry” he sad pointing at them. We started walking to the car and drove home. On the way home I teksted Lauren. “Hey girl. I’m finally here. It’s so good to se him again. And I think you right. I have fallen for him. But that’s a good thing, right? Text back! Love Kathrin ” I send the message whit a smile on my face. “That’s great. Bet he likes you too. I gat to go. Mum is yelling. Love you girl! ” I smiled when I saw the message. Her mum always yelled! This was gone be the best two weeks ever!
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Post by Aliice on Apr 3, 2007 13:06:07 GMT 1
aaw, danny da ^^ more
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Post by Lise Marie :) on Apr 8, 2007 18:34:03 GMT 1
her er mere When we arrived to the Mcfly house I was put in one of the guestrooms. The rest of the night we played XBOX and talked. But we all took a early night, the boys had so much the wanted to show me the next day. I woke up the next morning whit a feeling that this was going to be the best day ever. All day whit the boys in London. It just had the be perfect. I went downstairs, I heard some of them were already up. As I went in to the kitchen I saw a girl, cuddling up to Danny. I sad hey trying to get their attention. Danny look up whit a smile “Hey, sleep well?” he sad not thinking to introduce the girl. “Yes, I have. You to, I see?” I sad whit a smile on my face. I though he would joke it away, that the girl was just a friend. “Yes I have. Ehm this is Kelly. She came after you went to bed last night.” The girl smiled at me and holds her hand in front of me. “Hey I’m Kathrin, Danny’s best friend from Bolton” I sad as I took her hand. “I’m Kelly, Danny’s girl, a bit more then a friend I guess” she sad as she smiled at Danny. He just smiled back. It all hit me as a big yellow school bus. Danny didn’t think of me as I thought of him, we were just friends, he was in love whit this Kelly girl. Danny got me out of my thoughts by waiving his hand in front of me face. “What?” I asked a little too sharp. Danny looked at med a bit confused “I just wondered if you want some breakfast before we leave” I just looked into his blue eyes. “Uhm no thank you” I sad and walked in to the leaving room finding Dougie in the coach in his boxers. “You okey?” he asked when I got in. “Yeah sure am. What are you doing?” I answered him and sat down on the coach beside him. “Watching cartoons. You saw Kelly, didn’t you? I’ll tell you so you don’t have to figure it out your self, she’s a bitch” he sad whit a laugh. “Yeah, I though so.” The day went on, whiteout Kelly. She had something to take care of. That didn’t bother me at all. Danny sad they just were friends, and sometimes a bit more, our however he put it. The boys showed me around and we had a great time. Back at the house we ordered pizza and watch movies most of the night before we went to bed at 03.am. I actually didn’t think that much about Kelly and Danny that day. But that night I just couldn’t stop thinking about it. I wanted to be the girl he made love to, the girl who was always in his mind. I wanted to sleep beside him in his bed, right now. But he didn’t think of me that way. I knew that. We were just friends. I guess I should see myself lucky. Every girl prayed they were me. Best friend whit the one and only Danny Jones. I know I’m lucky, Danny is a wonderful person, the best. Whit this thoughts I soon fell a sleep. “He is gone flip, I knew she was a bitch, just after fame.” Harry sad when I walked downstairs. “What’s going on?” I asked as I looked at the three boys at the kitchen table. “Kelly went to the press and told them she was dating Danny, she gave them a picture of them together to. So the paper printed it” Tom sad after looking at every one. “That bitch” I screamed and I hated the girl even more. “Danny told me that their were just friends” I sad and looked at the guys. “Yeah that’s what Danny means by the whole thing, I guess she doesn’t agree. He is gone be so mad” It came from Dougie. “Who is gone be mad?” It came from the door. We all faced the door and there was Danny in his pj pans. “You are” Tom sad and handed Danny the paper. He just stared at the paper. “Are you okay?” I asked. “That bitch!!” he sad and throw the paper on the floor. He sat down on the coach in the leaving room whit his head in his hands. I walked in to him and laid my head on his shoulder and he took his arm around me. We sat like this for a while. We always did that if one of us were sad. The other guys walked in as Danny’s phone starts ringing. He pulls away from me and looks at his phone. “It’s Fletch. His must be pisst” Danny answers his manager and walks in to the kitchen. After about 10 minutes he comes back in the living room. “I talked to Fletch. He is gone tell the press that the story Kelly is telling is a lie. You wane go for a walk, Kathrin?” he sad looking at me. “Yeah sure, love to” I sad as Danny phone starts ringing again. He just looked at the screen and ignored the call. “Let’s go” he sad whit a smile. “I’m sorry I haven’t told you about Kelly. I guess we were more then just friends. But not in the way she is putting it” he sad after a while. “Were? Or are?” I asked looking up at him. “Were!! I talked to her on the phone and she had no apology for what she did. She know how much that is going to effect me, for weeks” he sad looking down at his shoes. “Yeah it is a bitch thing to do. I guess we all know what she was doing yesterday when she didn’t want to spend the day whit us” I sad as we crossed the road. The next thing I heard was screaming breaks and everything went black!
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Post by Lise Marie :) on Apr 8, 2007 21:50:52 GMT 1
vil gjerne ha komentara før eg legger ut resten av det eg har skreve
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Post by LilleMongolid on Apr 8, 2007 23:48:52 GMT 1
ooooooo someone got hit! I'm loving it:]
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Post by Aliice on Apr 9, 2007 14:22:03 GMT 1
oiii, mer (:
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Post by Lise Marie :) on Apr 9, 2007 20:47:04 GMT 1
her er litt mer!! lenger er eg ikke komt håper dåke liker den -*- Danny’s point of view -*- “Get a fucking ambulance!” I yelled as people were running around me, trying to help. The guy who hit her knew first aid and tried to get in touch whit her. Kathrin just lied there. She didn’t respond to anything. I just kept whispering her name. I touch her hair, the brown, silk hair. It was blood in it. I just looked at my fingers, the blood drawling true my fingers. I heard the ambulance got closer and suddenly we were on the way to the hospital. Waiting rooms, suddenly I didn’t like the word or the room. You are sitting there waiting for the news, good or bad. But I hadn’t got any news yet. Good or bad. All I knew was that Kathrin was at this hospital, badly hurt from the crash. It had been 2 hours since the accident. And somehow in between there I manage to call the other guys. They came running out of the elevator. Tom looked at me “Have you heard something?” I looked up from my hands. “No they won’t tell me anything.” I sad as the doctor came in to the room. I got on my feet and looked hopefully at the doctor. “Hey are you Danny Jones?” he asked. I just nodded. “How is she?” Harry asked. He saw that I didn’t manage to say a word. “She is in a coma. We had her in surgery, we had to take some of the pressure from her brain. It went well, but as I sad she’s in a coma and we don’t know when she will wake up.” He sad looking at us all. “Was she supposed to fell into a coma after the surgery?” Tom asked susceptibly. “No, something went wrong, we don’t know what” he sad after a while. “Can I see her?” I finally asked. “No not yet. We are putting her in her own room and that can take a while. I let you know when you can see her.”. Dougie put his arm around me. “Hey, dude. We are here for you. You know that, right?” he sad in the way only he could manage. “Yeah I know. Thank you guys” I tried to smile. “I’ll call Fletch. I can call her parents to if you want?” Tom sad and looked at me. “No I can call them myself” I sad walking away to make the call. Two hours later still in the hospital, I hadn’t got to see Kathrin yet. Her parents tried to get plain tickets but it was full so they had to wait. Dougie and Harry were trying to get us some food. “I’m sick of waiting. I got to se her!” I walked around in the room. Tom looked at me and went to see the lady behind the desk. “Excuse me, but my mate here, he has been waiting for several hours to see his friend. Can you please help us?” he sad a bit mad whit a fake smile. The lady looked at him and picked up the phone. After hanging up she looked at us, as I was standing beside Tom, “The doctor will be right whit you” she sad whit a fake smile. We went to sit down as the doctor walked true the doors. “Can I see her?” I sad as I got up from my chair. “Yes you can. But only one person at the time for now. She is still in a coma” he sad and started walking out of the room. I followed him to the floor were she was placed. As I walked into her room, I could see her lying in her bed, so peaceful. Whit all the burses and the blood, she still looked like the most beautiful girl. “Hey girl, how you doing?” I sad as I went over to the bed. She didn’t respond. “I will stay here, as long as I takes. I will be here when you wake up. I promise” I sat down on a chair beside her bed. Three hours later I still sat there, beside her bed. I had eaten some food Dougie come whit. Now Fletch were standing beside me, talking about something, I didn’t listen. They other guys did. I knew the press had got a tip about what had happen. “So, I’ll have a press conference at 12.am. Do you guys wane come or?” I heard Fletch say when I was back in the conversation. “I’m not leaving her” I said and looked at Kathrin. The other guys looked at each other. “We will be staying here whit Danny” Dougie sad and I sent the guys a thankful look and smiled. The clock turned 12.am and the press conference was sent live. All the guys were in Kathrin’s room watching it. “As you all have heard, Danny’s best friend was in a accident. She is now in a coma. Danny and the other boys are in the hospital whit her and they has sad they are exposing all they work for a while. They all hope the fans will support them on this and that the press will respect their privacy” Fletch sad on the screen. He walked of whit a straight face, not answering any question. Lauren came running in to the cafeteria. The guys were sitting at a table near the exit. The guys finally got me out of Kathrin’s room. “There is Lauren” I sad as she noticed me. She run over and I gave her a big hug. “I can’t believe this is happening” she sad whit a shaky voice. “I know. Were are her parents?” I asked. “They are up in her room. The nurses sad you were down here so I went to find you” she sad.
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Post by Aliice on Apr 9, 2007 20:58:14 GMT 1
xO! aaaaida, skriiv meeeir >
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Post by Lise Marie :) on Apr 10, 2007 13:58:36 GMT 1
-*- Lauren’s point of view -*-
“Dear diary After a week, Kathrin was still in a coma. Danny never leaves her alone. He only goes out from the room to shower our get some food. The other boys got him to sleep in his own bed back at the house for two nights. He is at the hospital all the time. I think he might like her more then just a friend. The way he looks at her and talks about her. I just wish she knew. Maybe she does. Who knows? I just want her to wake up again. I got to go. I’m eating whit Dougie. We have a good aye to one another. Maybe something is going on. I don’t know. I really hope so. Talk to you later. ”
“Hey, how you doing?” I asked Danny as I walked into Kathrin’s room. “I think you are supposed to ask the patient that” he answered whit a smile. “You will be the patient soon if you don’t start eating again, you know?” I sad as I walked out of the room again to find Dougie. Down the hall I saw him talking to some fans. I smiled at him “Do you wane get something to eat?” I asked. The girls who stand there beside him looked shocked at me. “Yeah sure thing, hun” he sad smiling at me.
-*- Danny’s point of view -*- “Good morning, Parker. Still sleeping, huh?” I sad as I woke up the next morning, looking at Kathrin’s sleeping body. “Why can’t you wake up? I miss you so.” I sad as I took her hand in mine. She didn’t respond. “You know, before I left for London I fell in love whit this amazing girl. I have known her for years. I kissed her at the airport before I left, but didn’t have the guts to tell her. I’m so sorry. I should have told you, long before this. I bet you can’t even hear me now” I sad as tears appears in my eyes and continues down my cheek. Then I felt something move in my hand. I looked at it. It was Kathrin’s hand, it was moving. I looked at her. I knew she didn’t wake up. The doctor told me it could happen this way, slowly. “So you heard that? Great. Now I think you should wake up” I sad as I stared at her. I got up and walked out of the room. I got to tell the others.
For the next few days I took a grip of myself and starting doing stuff. Kathrin knew I loved her. And I think she wanted me to go on whit my life. And I knew some day soon she would wake up. Me and the band had more and more band practise and were in some interviews.
“Hey Mrs. Parker” I sad as I walked into Kathrin’s room one night. “Hey Danny” she sad as she looked up and smiled from the magazine she was reading. “Why don’t you get back to the house and get some sleep? I can stay here” Mrs Parker was living at our house now, as Mr Parker had to get back to work in Bolton. “That would be great, thank you Danny” she sad and give me and her daughter a hug and walked out of the room. Harry walked in to the room and smiled at me “Hey man. How is it going?” he sad. “Good. But I don’t think she ever will wake up again” I sad looking at my hands. “I think she will” he sad laughing. “What?” I asked and looked at him whit a confused face. Why was he laughing? It’s not funny. “Hey Daniel! I thought you had faith in me” a laughing voice sad behind me. I knew that voice. I hadn’t heard it for the past few weeks. I turned around looking at the most beautiful smiling face, Kathrin’s face. I just looked at her in shock. “Kathrin, your awake” was all that came out of my mouth, before I hugged, a hug that should have lasted for ever.
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Post by Lise Marie :) on Apr 10, 2007 13:59:15 GMT 1
no har eg ikke mere hehe skal se om eg får skreve litt mer seinere.. ;P
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Post by LilleMongolid on Apr 10, 2007 16:08:48 GMT 1
me loving it:D
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