Post by Aliice on May 19, 2007 0:20:26 GMT 1
Denne er min første standalone! xD Sorry, for at jeg har kjeeempe mange feil med skrivinga og gramma osv... x) (Det er egentlig derfor jeg skal begynne å skrive fic osv. på engelsk, practice practice xP)
My teardrops filled in my eyes and slided down at my cheek, my jaw, my bare chest, and my naked feet. I lost Maxine, my cloesest girl friend. Maxine became killed on my bestfriend garage, helloween party, 4am. I wish 4 am was forever. 4 am were the most people die. She was the most incredible friend I ever had in my life. All I want was Maxine could come back They couldn’t just take away her from me.
Everybody loved her, her smile, her laugh and she was very good to console people, specially me. Everytime a girl hurted me, she was the number one who supported me, helped me. Her silk blonde hair was soft and her eyes was so amazing. Each time her eyes glanced over me I couldn’t stop blush. My stomach was weak.
She always was on my side. My real words never dug it out. I began to have feelings for her when she first touched my cheeks with her pillowy lips. Maxine had softly baby hands. You couldn’t take away from her hands. When Maxine kissed my cheeks we blushed together. We only sat there together near each other. Wished I was strong enough to kiss her cheek and her lips, but I wasn’t. Wish I could touch her bare tan skin.
Now my beautiful princess slept away from this world to another world.
I sat in the cabin. The room was dark and untidy. My clothes floated everywhere. ”Maxine!, please please! Come back!” I yelled and knocked hard my fist down at the coffeetable. Mine salttears rolled down. “Answer me! I’m missing you! Come back, please...” My hole body was so cold, I shivered.
“Please, please Maxine... “ My eyes was bloodblasted and tired. I looked like a bulldog. I scanned over the room, silence. If Maxine was here she would be very disappointed at me. She will forever be my number one princess.
The sun began to crawl. I can’t believe it’s 4 am and you are gone, but I’m alone. My eyes began to shrink, then it shot. I fell asleep forever. Now I’m dead, finally. I am on my way to your dream world.
‘Beep beep. Beep beep.’
From Harrys phone:
”Hiii, Harry it was just a helloween joke. I hope you didn’t get hurt?=P If you really thought I was dead in the garage, I think you are really stupid ^^, You can pay me back, one day x) See you later, Danny boy. Maxiine <3 xxx”
This standalone idea and lyric were by
LostProphets - 4AM Forever
4 am Forever
Yesterday I lost my closest friend
Yesterday I wanted time to end
I wonder if my heart will ever mend
I just let you slip away
4 AM forever
Yesterday I lost my closest friend
Yesterday I wanted time to end
I wonder if my heart will ever mend
I just let you slip away
4 AM forever
My teardrops filled in my eyes and slided down at my cheek, my jaw, my bare chest, and my naked feet. I lost Maxine, my cloesest girl friend. Maxine became killed on my bestfriend garage, helloween party, 4am. I wish 4 am was forever. 4 am were the most people die. She was the most incredible friend I ever had in my life. All I want was Maxine could come back They couldn’t just take away her from me.
Everybody loved her, her smile, her laugh and she was very good to console people, specially me. Everytime a girl hurted me, she was the number one who supported me, helped me. Her silk blonde hair was soft and her eyes was so amazing. Each time her eyes glanced over me I couldn’t stop blush. My stomach was weak.
Maybe I'll never see you smile again
Maybe you thought that it was all pretend
All these words that I could never say
I just let them slip away
4 AM forever
Maybe you thought that it was all pretend
All these words that I could never say
I just let them slip away
4 AM forever
She always was on my side. My real words never dug it out. I began to have feelings for her when she first touched my cheeks with her pillowy lips. Maxine had softly baby hands. You couldn’t take away from her hands. When Maxine kissed my cheeks we blushed together. We only sat there together near each other. Wished I was strong enough to kiss her cheek and her lips, but I wasn’t. Wish I could touch her bare tan skin.
Now my beautiful princess slept away from this world to another world.
Why don't you hear me when I'm calling out to you (to you)
Why don't you listen when I try to make it through (to you)
Goodbye, goodbye
Goodbye, you never know
Hold a little tighter
4 AM forever
Why don't you listen when I try to make it through (to you)
Goodbye, goodbye
Goodbye, you never know
Hold a little tighter
4 AM forever
I sat in the cabin. The room was dark and untidy. My clothes floated everywhere. ”Maxine!, please please! Come back!” I yelled and knocked hard my fist down at the coffeetable. Mine salttears rolled down. “Answer me! I’m missing you! Come back, please...” My hole body was so cold, I shivered.
Maybe one day when I can move along
Maybe someday when you can hear this song
You won't let it slip away
4 AM forever
Maybe someday when you can hear this song
You won't let it slip away
4 AM forever
“Please, please Maxine... “ My eyes was bloodblasted and tired. I looked like a bulldog. I scanned over the room, silence. If Maxine was here she would be very disappointed at me. She will forever be my number one princess.
And I'd wish the sun would never come
It's 4 AM and you are gone
I hope you know you're letting go
It's 4 AM and I'm alone
It's 4 AM and you are gone
I hope you know you're letting go
It's 4 AM and I'm alone
The sun began to crawl. I can’t believe it’s 4 am and you are gone, but I’m alone. My eyes began to shrink, then it shot. I fell asleep forever. Now I’m dead, finally. I am on my way to your dream world.
Why don't you hear me when I'm calling out to you (to you)
Why don't you listen when I try to make it through (to you)
Goodbye, goodbye
Goodbye, you never know
Hold a little tighter
Why don't you hear me when I'm calling out to you (to you)
Why don't you listen when I try to make it through (to you)
Goodbye, goodbye
SGoodbye, you never know
Hold a little tighter
4 AM forever...
Why don't you listen when I try to make it through (to you)
Goodbye, goodbye
Goodbye, you never know
Hold a little tighter
Why don't you hear me when I'm calling out to you (to you)
Why don't you listen when I try to make it through (to you)
Goodbye, goodbye
SGoodbye, you never know
Hold a little tighter
4 AM forever...
‘Beep beep. Beep beep.’
From Harrys phone:
”Hiii, Harry it was just a helloween joke. I hope you didn’t get hurt?=P If you really thought I was dead in the garage, I think you are really stupid ^^, You can pay me back, one day x) See you later, Danny boy. Maxiine <3 xxx”
This standalone idea and lyric were by
LostProphets - 4AM Forever