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Post by Ida on May 10, 2006 18:16:39 GMT 1
Det betyr egentlig fitte xD Eller, på 1600-tallet brukte man det som fitte... Nå er det mer sånn som Eli sa HAHA*lættis*Det er saaant =O Ikke spør hvor jeg får vite det fra
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Post by mattass on May 10, 2006 19:29:03 GMT 1
=O Peter... mental... =| Er han OC forresten..? xD OC? heeeeh?
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Post by Kristin( : on May 10, 2006 22:58:39 GMT 1
hoho....
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Post by mattass on May 18, 2006 18:48:28 GMT 1
I looked up and saw Steve behind Peter, as Peter stood looking at what he had done Steve knocked him out. "Run.. NOW" Yelled Jayne and we forgot about James. "WHAT ABOUT ME" He yelled. "Shit.. James... we gotta get him to the nurse.." Said Dellie and we helped him up. We knew the teachers had closed all classrooms now and we were the one out in the halls fighting against time and against Peter. "There... come on" Said Dougie bursting up the door to the school nurse, who sat terrified in her chair looking at us. "He is knocked out.. but ... James is shot... we need you to remove the bullet... " Said Dave and looked at the nurse. "That is not my area.. We need to get him to the hospital..." She said getting up. "We cant.. He`ll be shooting our heads off before we get out of here.." Stated Harry. "I heard the gun shot.. Who got the gun?" "Peter Armstrong..." "That sweet boy?" "Yeah.." "Alright.. But I cant remove the bullet... We need to put pressure on it.. and call the cops.. but i know they are on their way... someone has called them.. but you need to make sure he doesnt fall asleep or anything" Said the nurse. "What? Why?" Asked James. "Because then we gotta fight against Peter and get you the hell out of here.. if you fall asleep.. your have a bigger chance of dying... then surviving... " "Oh god.." I mumbled and looked at her. She was serious.
- James -
"Where the hell is Danny?" I asked looking around feeling the nurse put pressure on my leg. "FUCK" I cried out. "He is out in the hall.. looking for peter.." Said Steve. "GET HIM DAMN IT" Yelled Dellie and they rushed out.
- Karen -
"I know what we heard minutes ago was a gun shot..." Said Claire. "It was.." Said Tom sinking to the floor worrying just as me about what had happened. I just hoped no one was hurt. But it didnt promise good when there was a gun shot. "We gotta go out there checking who the hell who got shot" Said Claire getting up. "No.. Claire.. we cant.." "Why not? What if James has been shot?" She asked looking at me. "He cant be.." I mumbled biting my lip. "He just cant be..." We sat there for an hour before anyone said anything. Tom just sat in a corner for himself rocking back an forth. "We should check.." Said Claire and got up. I got up to following her, she broke the glass to a display thing of a bat and took it out. "Mr Hart is going to kill you.." Said Steve some guy in our class. "If the person with a gun doesnt first" She said before opening the door carefully stepping out. All the others followed her out in the hell. "Be quiet, he can be anywhere...." Said Tom and tip toed next to Claire.
- Danny - I walked around the corner and looked around. No one was there, not a soul. I tip toed down the hall heading for the cafeteria to see if he was there. All i could think about walking around was how much I had to prevent him from hurting more people, it was bad enough that I had broken Peter down like that. I never thought about what i did to him, and I never took a minute to see him for who he was. If I just had taken that minute to talk to him properly, we wouldnt be trapped in our own school waiting to be released from it. Or someone to get seriously hurt so he saw what he was doing. When I reached the cafeteria I looked inside to see, all I saw was people in there scared of what was happening. "Come with me" I said to them and they peeked up. "Im gonna get us out of here, 5 people, come on... Tina, Jessie, Todd, Dean and Charles.. come on.." I said and smiled at them. They didnt know Peter was still around. They came towards me running like hell, opening the door to them I peeked out and still no sign of Peter. We walked down the hall, and headed for the excit. I just hoped we would run into the reason why we were trapped in the school. By now.. I knew someone had gotten out and told the police what was happening. When we crossed the hall and found the main entrence... Peter stepped out. "Danny..." He said and I stopped. Behind Peter Claire, Karen, Tom and about 5 other people came around the corner. "Peter" I mumbled looking at him. Claire gasped silently as she saw the gun he had in his hands pointing towards me. "You know... I`ve become tired running after you now... Each time someone has prevented me from shooting you.. but now.. these kids behind you wont do it..." "But we can" Said Tom and stepped up. "You.." Mumbled Peter "I thought you wanted to be my friend.." "So did I .... But not when you are like this, saying you are going to hurt my friend, I know he has been a fucking asshole towards you, but he is really a cool guy.." "Who makes fun of people..." "Sure thing, he does.. and he is a total airhead for doing that... but If you give up and give me the gun I swear that he will stop doing it from this moment on.." "Yeah, he isnt like you think" Said Karen and came forwards. WHAT THE HELL WAS GOING ON?! I screamed inside. "Or if you wanna do it.. shoot me... In the knee, my leg, my arm, my shoulder, my hear-" "NO" Screamed Claire and they all looked at her. I stepped forwards so Peter had a better hand on shooting me, I knew he wanted to do it.
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Post by IdaPida on May 25, 2006 22:44:49 GMT 1
du er jævli bra til å skrive *sukke* jeg får bare writers block om jeg begynner.. har faktisk bare fullført to fan fics i hele mitt liv, den ene var om hele a1 og masse sånt tull, mens den andre var hovedsaklig om christian ingebrigtsen..
har hele 3 fan fics liggende som har bare vært uferdig i flere år..
synes du er kjempeflink som klarer å skrive så mange gode fics på så kort tid..
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Post by Cydonia on May 30, 2006 15:31:11 GMT 1
;D syyke peter
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Post by Julie:) on May 30, 2006 16:45:53 GMT 1
Ja....syke, syke mann...
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Post by mattass on May 30, 2006 16:53:37 GMT 1
Ferdig med denna ficcen så æ kan like godt oppdater siste delen av den..
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Post by mattass on May 30, 2006 17:01:20 GMT 1
"Do it.." I said and looked at him. "Why?" He asked. "Dont you want to?" I mumbled, halfly annoyed. "Yes... " "But you dont want to end up in jail?" Asked Tom. "No..." "Good.. so give me the gun and we can walk out slowly from this place" Said Tom. "No..." Said Peter looking at me with a angry face. "You wont be able to bring people like that down again... Im sorry..." He said and pulled the trigger, everything happened in slowly motion. The bullet hit me and I fell to the ground.
I heard people scream as i gasped for air, it felt like the bullet was pushing to go further in. I could feel my lungs blocking up. "GET THE FUCKING COPS AND PARAMEDICS" yelled Tom. I heard another shot and i knew who it was. Peter had shot himself. "No.. help peter..." I said as Tom reached me. "No... Fuck him.... I dont want you to die..." "Its too late.... I cant breath... it hit my heart didnt it?" I asked. ".... I..... yeah..." hiccuped Karen who had reached us now. "Take care of claire please..." I said and gasped once more for air. "Sure thing mate" Said Karen. "Thanks... Im sorry.." I said and stopped breathing.
- The end -
Gidda ikke skrive meir på den.. så enden vart litt... bajs xD
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Post by Julie:) on May 30, 2006 17:11:23 GMT 1
Åh, så trist men veldig bra
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Post by Cydonia on May 30, 2006 19:14:24 GMT 1
Saaaaad
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Post by Kristin( : on May 30, 2006 19:57:29 GMT 1
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